Tuesday, October 20, 2015

Scene description week 1 term 4

I'm blogging this because I enjoyed writing it.
We were learning to explain the picture, put alliteration and simile's in the scene description.

Scene description Aston
Image result for nature scene
Success Criteria
  • Has strong adjectives
  • Different sentence beginnings
  • Different sentence lengths
  • A simile and/or alliteration
  • Has an introduction, body and conclusion
  • Thoughtful word choices
  • Show examples of single, compound and complex sentences.


I turn around and in front of my eyes is the most amazing scene. Mossy stones lying like big humps in the frothy, flowing lake and trees dangling off the ground. A rusty old shed sitting lonely in the middle of the silent forest. The silent tiny waterfall sliding down the rocky rocks and out into the misty river. Bright light shines like night  stars through the smooth green trees. This place is the best place for camping.