Thursday, March 31, 2016

Free choice learning task: Camp description 23/3/16

I'm blogging this because it was fun writing it.
I'm proud of this because I spent a long time on.

Purpose: to describe

WALT: create content with clear and interesting details

Success Criteria
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, taste, hear, smell)
  • Stays on the topic (the part of camp you’re describing)

The Wire bridge

There were petrified people sobbing while we tiptoed  over the incredibly  high, scary bridge.  Kids were weeping and trying not to  get frightened. You could smell the muddy water from the murky and shallow river. Thankfully the  hard slippery wood helped keep  all the kids on the long bridge. All of the kids were almost across the bridge. We took a last breath, jogged across the bridge to the end. We made it to  the stairs and onto the bright green grass. The bridge was a terrifying  walk across.

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