Thursday, March 30, 2017

Cape Kidnappers / Special place HB

This is my special place HB. My special place is Cape Kidnappers I helped a kiwi up there my dads boss owns a farm out there we drove to where the kiwis were in a Range rover vogue 2013.

Purpose: to inform
WALT describe with clear and interesting details
Success Criteria
  • Quick plan to prepare for the writing task (brainstorm with words or ideas)
  • Interesting beginning and ending
  • Using the senses (see, touch, hear, smell)
  • Includes strong descriptive words (adjectives)
  • Uses the present tense


Examples: Bamboo Forest / Scene Description by Dylan / Scene Description by Sophia


Writing Task: Describing a special place in Hawke’s Bay


Cape Kidnappers
cape kidnappers.jpg
When I turn around I see the most magnificent scene. The white sea gulls glide through the air the big blue waves grow as they come into shore. The bare green mountains stay silent as the wind bashes into them the tall yellow grass sways a humongous boulder sits in the cold blue sea this is the most amazing thing I have ever seen. The big blue sky covers the hills. One slightly visible cloud sits silently in the air.

Tuesday, March 21, 2017

Camp Memories

 Camp Memories 


These are my camp memories the most challenging thing about making this slide show was I had to go back and re-edited the video 3 times and that was hard. The other thing that was hard was writing the story because the font was small because I needed to fit the writing onto the page. These are the things that are on each page. Page 1 is the page cover, Page 2 Criteria, Page 3 camp story, Page 4 camp reflection, Page 5 Letter parents, Page 6 Video, Page 7 Photos.